From 2a38cb5ad885827d815685662a8e572016a8cb3c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Josh Wood Date: Mon, 25 Apr 2016 10:58:25 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Documentation/doc.md: Make headings boring :) Make the heading sentences that introduce each list of documents a little more standard language, remove implied 2nd person, reduce exclamations. --- Documentation/docs.md | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/Documentation/docs.md b/Documentation/docs.md index 2871c4ce5..60224c577 100644 --- a/Documentation/docs.md +++ b/Documentation/docs.md @@ -4,11 +4,11 @@ etcd is a distributed key-value store designed to reliably and quickly preserve ## Getting started -New to etcd? Start by [downloading and building][download_build] etcd! +New etcd users and developers should get started by [downloading and building][download_build] etcd. ## Developing with etcd -Want to develop applications with etcd? Start by [setting up a local cluster][local_cluster]! +The easiest way to get started using etcd as a distributed key-value store for your applications is to [set up a local cluster][local_cluster]. - [Setting up local clusters][local_cluster] - [Interacting with etcd][interacting] @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ Want to develop applications with etcd? Start by [setting up a local cluster][lo ## Operating etcd clusters -Want to operate etcd clusters? Start by [setting up a cluster on multiple machines][clustering]! +Administrators who need to create reliable and scalable key-value stores for the developers they support should begin with a [cluster on multiple machines][clustering]. - [Setting up clusters][clustering] - [Configuration][conf] @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ Want to operate etcd clusters? Start by [setting up a cluster on multiple machin ## Learning -Want to learn more about the concepts and internals behind etcd? Read the following pages! +To learn more about the concepts and internals behind etcd, read the following pages: - Why etcd - Concepts