diff --git a/README b/README
index 6723ec3..f631bcb 100644
--- a/README
+++ b/README
@@ -1,10 +1,4 @@
 = next
-get web presence in good enough shape to point to from blog post
-  gbe-web
-    basic design / brand
-    basic copy
-    sign up form
-
 blog post on Go on Heroku
   write
   review with Keith
@@ -14,10 +8,17 @@ blog post on Postgres
   review with Keith
   ship & market
 
+get web presence in good enough shape to point to from blog post
+  gbe-web
+    basic design / brand
+    basic copy - landing, post-subscribe, post-confirm
+    subscription management
+
 validate book style in editor
 
 validate book style in web mockup
 
+join Google+ and claim website
 
 = vision
 must-have book for hackers interested in Go
diff --git a/src/22-varargs.go b/src/22-varargs.go
index de2c0b4..42a4434 100644
--- a/src/22-varargs.go
+++ b/src/22-varargs.go
@@ -1,17 +1,21 @@
+                                      // Varadic functions can be called with any number of
+									  // trailing arguments.
+
 package main
 
 import "fmt"
 
-func add(nums ...int) int {
-	total := 0
-	for _, num := range nums {
-		total += num
-	}
-	return total
-}
-
-func main() {
-	fmt.Println(add(1, 2, 3, 4))
-	nums := []int{1, 2, 3, 4, 5}
-	fmt.Println(add(nums...))
+func add(nums ...int) int {           // Varadic args are declared with `...type` and passed in as
+	for _, num := range nums {        // a slice.
+		total += num                
+	}                               
+	return total                    
+}                                   
+                                    
+func main() {                       
+	fmt.Println(add(1, 2))            // Varadic functions can be called in the usual way.
+	fmt.Println(add(1, 2, 3, 4))    
+                                    
+	nums := []int{2, 3, 4, 5}         // If you already have multiple args in a `slice`, apply
+	fmt.Println1(add(1, nums...))     // them to a varadic function using `func(arg, slice...)`.
 }
diff --git a/www/landing.txt b/www/landing.txt
index d4f945e..aaf923c 100644
--- a/www/landing.txt
+++ b/www/landing.txt
@@ -1,13 +1,23 @@
-                        <Go by Example>
+                                           <Go by Example>
 
-	                        
-	     +--------------+
-	 	 |   			|   
-		 |   			|     Your practical guide to Go.
-	     |      Go      |
-	     |      by      |     Sign up to hear when it's ready:
-	     |    Example   |     [   (Your Email)   ]  {Go}
-         |              |
-         |              |
-         |              |
-         +--------------+
+                           
+
+
+                   +---------------------------------------------------------------+
+                   |                                                               |
+                   |                                                               |
+                   |                                                               |
+                   |        +--------------+                                       |
+                   |        |              |                                       |
+                   |        |              |     Your practical guide to Go.       |
+                   |        |      Go      |                                       |
+                   |        |      by      |     Get updates about the book:       |
+                   |        |    Example   |     [ (Your Email) ]  {Subscribe}     |
+                   |        |              |                                       |
+                   |        |              |                                       |
+                   |        |              |                                       |
+                   |        +--------------+                                       |
+                   |                                                               |
+                   |                                                               |
+                   |                                                               |
+                   +---------------------------------------------------------------+                                                          +