From e70a6d4178111f0cff7fd6368fc274d97a4e6d18 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Mark McGranaghan <mmcgrana@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 10 Oct 2012 22:00:25 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] tweak

---
 examples/slices/slices.go | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/examples/slices/slices.go b/examples/slices/slices.go
index d34022f..9d9620d 100644
--- a/examples/slices/slices.go
+++ b/examples/slices/slices.go
@@ -7,11 +7,11 @@ import "fmt"
 
 func main() {
 
-    // In contrast to arrays, slices are typed only
-    // by the elements it contains (not the number of
-    // elements). To create an empty slice with non-zero
-    // length, use the builtin `make`. Here we make a
-    // slice of `int`s of length 5.
+    // Unlike arrays, slices are typed only by the
+    // elements they contain (not the number of elements).
+    // To create an empty slice with non-zero length, use
+    // the builtin `make`. Here we make a slice of `int`s
+    // of length `5`.
     s := make([]int, 5)
 
     // New slices are initially empty-valued.